User:OneMustImagineAGradStudentHappy/Tantalocene trihydride/Ephineprine Peer Review

General info
Mark
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:OneMustImagineAGradStudentHappy/Tantalocene trihydride
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):None

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- Good introduction, no notes

Synthesis

- "although the authors report that the preparation does not always succeed" really begs the question why not - may be good to provide additional context

- second reaction scheme - the two consecutive arrows could be replaced by a single arrow with "then H2O" on the bottom?

Characterisation

- " the three Ta-H bond distances being essentially equal" do we know the Ta-H bond length(s)?

Reactivity

- "ClPPh2 has been shown to insert into the analogous NbCp2H3 " into the niobium analogue, NbCp2H3

- "When TaCp2H3 is photolyzed for 36 h at 15 °C in benzene-d6, analysis of the evolved gases revealed that there was a mixture of H2, HD, and D2" decide between is (front half) and was (back half)

- Awesome! That's it