User:Onov3056/OLES2129

VEGANISM

Firstly, I would like to pick on the topic about “veganism”. Regarding veganism, it has broad point of views. Therefore, based on its revision history statistics, there are approximately 4,000 editors with SlimVirgin in the first place. SlimVirgin has been active in editing since 2005 up to 2017 for the latest ("Veganism - Page History - XTools", 2019). Throughout the revision history, there has been substantial changes in the context and mostly in correcting the grammatical errors. Nonetheless, there has only slight changes in the content layout.

However, some changes might be helpful for the readers. For example, including a surveys’ results with varied questions to acknowledge the topic more details. It encourages the readers to think critically about the subject. Also, as a second reader, I would have input more relevant pictures about veganism to help the viewers have greater understanding about vegan since the pictures in the current website are insufficient.

Reference List

Veganism - Page History - XTools. (2019). Retrieved from https://xtools.wmflabs.org/articleinfo/en.wikipedia.org/Veganism