User:Ooogaboooga 101/Chemical purity/Santory300 Peer Review

General info
Ooogaboooga
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ooogaboooga 101/Chemical purity
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chemical purity

Evaluate the drafted changes
My peer has elaborated the Lead section to reflect the new content added, providing a concise and clear introductory sentence that describes the article's topic. The author can include the significance of chemical purity in different areas to help readers understand why chemical purity is a critical concept in various fields.

The content added to the article is relevant to the topic and adds valuable information about different grades of purity. The citations are up to date. The content is well-written, concise, clear, and easy to read. The article body is well organized, and there are no noticeable grammatical or spelling errors. Nevertheless, the article could benefit from more examples to illustrate the applications of different purity grades. Furthermore, the article does not include images that could be added to enhance the understanding of the topic. The author can add a picture of the purification apparatus as a visual aid to help readers understand the chemical purification process.

The author maintained a neutral tone without any bias. The content does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another. This neutrality contributes to the balance of the article, ensuring that viewpoints are neither overrepresented nor underrepresented.

The sources and references used in the article are reliable and reflect the available literature on the topic. The content accurately reflects the cited sources, and the links work properly.

In summary, the article provides a clear and concise introduction to chemical purity, highlighting its significance in various fields. The added content is relevant and well-cited, contributing valuable information about different purity grades. While the article is well-written and organized, it could be enhanced with more examples and images, such as a purification apparatus, to aid understanding. The author maintains a neutral tone, ensuring a balanced presentation of the topic. The sources and references are reliable, and the content accurately reflects the cited literature.