User:Openoyer/Anna Maria Island/Williamsj88 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

openoyer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Openoyer/Anna_Maria_Island?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anna Maria Island

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this looks really good so far. No lead was added or changed, and I don't think it really needs it. Content is neutral and relevant to the topic. I can see you added several tables to include the statistics of the island including the climate, demographics, and racial composition of the people on the island. The charts are a good touch to add to the article. Due to its size already, the article has a good amount of information so the charts add a great piece of information that was missing. Adding the hurricanes was a good addition as well. The information you added to summarize the hurricanes was good. I think if possible, it may be a good idea to add a little more text to the information given. You could maybe go deeper into the racial composition on the island and why there are more whites than others. Your sources appear to clearly back up your information. Overall I think this looks good so far.