User:Openskies789/Chicken/Jessica nakkoul Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Openskies789


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Chicken

Evaluate the drafted changes
Very great job! I liked the length of this article. I also loved how you added pictures to create an imagine in a readers mind. Everything you wrote was very well written and related to the topic. Everything that was written seemed accurate as well. Great job again!

Thank you. There was so many disjointed information prior. I had to even add citation to the Original posters claims because they forgot their references!