User:Optfrost/Soviet Army/Wvc9 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Optfrost)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Optfrost/Soviet_Army?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Soviet Army

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft begins with an engaging and informative lead, which includes information that is relevant to the article. The draft itself contains a lot of relevant information to the topic which is not included in the original wikipedia article, including a section of the Soviet-Afghan War, which is completely missing from the original article. Although the information included is all relevant to the topic, the first few paragraphs lack citations. There are three different sources included later in the draft which are all relevant to the topic. However it could be improved by the inclusion of more sources, especially in the earlier paragraphs. The tone of the draft and the way the way the information is presented is all unbiased and factual. The draft includes one helpful subheading for the Soviet-Afghan war, however the first few paragraphs lack a specific heading which denotes what they are referring to. Despite these small errors, the draft is very well written and does a good job of presenting relevant information in an unbiased way.