User:Orangearnie/Mytilenian Debate/BargeWoodland Peer Review

I really liked your project so far. I am not sure if this is entirely necessary for this project but to try to stay in past tense, I think it is mostly the original article that switches into present tense when discussing Thucydides among other subjects and this is not incredibly important but can help for fluency. I am a very visual person so I think the article could benefit from some images. I understand it is hard to get very exact free images. I have a free image of Thucydides : https://openverse.org/image/0ecfd2c3-d985-498f-be00-1559f613a600?q=Thucydides

Here is also an image of Diodotus:

https://openverse.org/image/96f6a891-6774-4a64-965f-dd68a8a4cd76?q=Diodotus

I saw your note and understand that you have been helping to improve citations which is very good.

Hopefully these images help and you are going to do great!

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