User:Orbsofperception/Three Fujins/Exoticfreccs Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe the content you have written in your sandbox is relevant and good so far. I would like to see you expand your writing more in each section. I would love to hear more about the Weeping Realism technique and learn more on how it was used in the painting you were assigned. When you get the chance, I would include more of interpretation in the introduction paragraph about the painting and the meaning behind it. Make sure it is separate from your formal analysis and how other artists have viewed this piece.