User:Orbsofperception/Three Fujins/Italex128 Peer Review

General info
Orbsofperception
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Orbsofperception/Three_Fujins?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The article well written, relevant, and without apparent bias.
 * The Lead is a good introduction to the article
 * The Article Body should probably be called something more descriptive and should probably have more than just a discussion on the artist. There should also probably be more subsections.
 * The article is very short and should have more representation of the art itself.
 * Cite links did not work for me.
 * First sentence in the Article Body section does not have a citation.