User:Organizedchaos39/Dual consciousness/Ca$hley Peer Review

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Ashley's Peer Review: This is such an interesting topic Kayley- I was unaware of how the discovery that the corpus callosum has an effect on dual processing was related to alien hand syndrome! Thank you for clarifying exactly what was added in your sandbox. You write in a way that is easily understood and your sources appear reliable/the links work. The content is certainly relevant to your topic. A few things I would consider adding: what the corpus callosum is (if not included previously in the full article), what a corpus callosotomy is (if not included previously in the full article). To improve organization I would also consider moving the sentence about switching attention to the end of the paragraph it is in, as the following example provided does not relate to switching attention. Your tone throughout was neutral and balanced and did not attempt to sway opinions one way or another. Very cool contributions overall!