User:Oroz0001/Dorothy Hoffman/Moriahgonzales3 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) Oroz0001
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Dorothy Hoffman

Overall evaluation
I am peer reviewing the article of Dorothy Hoffman from user Oroz0001, there has not been anything added by Ozoz0001 and there in nothing currently in the sandbox. There is only the lead and no other sections in the article other than references, external links, and publications. The first paragraph is clear and concise but could use some updating. The article is neutral. There are not enough hyperlinks to specific words or organizations. Some of the information does not have any citations and there is no media or table of contents. This article needs more organization and information.