User:Ortiz56/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Vascular Plant


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article gives a brief info about the vascular plant and its growth. It also does a comparison to the non vascular plant and its habitat. The article need more work and a better introduction to really capture the reader. It also needs to be more well structured and should be provided with more solid information. Definitely can be improved.


 * Sources
 * Vascular plant

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Himalayan Brown Bear


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article gives a break down of the Himalayan Brown Bear but there isn't enough information about it. Its not well structured and can use more improvement in certain categories and expand on the information instead of being so vague and not enough detail.


 * Sources
 * Himalayan brown bear

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Freshwater Phytoplankton


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article itself just needs works. There is a brief introduction bout the freshwater phytoplankton but that about it. It needs more information and more structure in order to fully have an article about the species.


 * Sources
 * Freshwater phytoplankton

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Black Fly


 * Article Evaluation
 * It gives a brief description of the black fly but it needs more information such like the physiology of the fly, what they eat, comparison to other fly families, and also how it can effect the human health if there is an infestation besides how it affects lives stock.


 * Sources
 * Black fly

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Black Panther


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article feels like it deviates from what its suppose to be and its not well structured. It does not gives a good intro about the black panther and then it goes on and talks about other cats similar to this cat. It definitely needs more work and more reference and citations.


 * Sources
 * Black panther