User:OsamaBinLagging

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About me
In my small town I'm known vaguely by many as, "that unicycle guy", as I unicycle pretty much everywhere in varying comedic garb. My most recent expedition was in an extraordinary, tailored Spiderman suit, but my most popular outfit was in a complete, hazmat suit with a respirator. The Washington State Memes Facebook page, with almost 115,000 followers shared an image of me in this suit in 2020. Other then that interesting, yet genuinely minor part of my identity, I am most centrally an Eastern Orthodox Christian.

My Wikipedia interests
I am most interested in Wikipedia as a portal to find more reliable sources through its' references page, but I have inherited a new interest from one of my college professors; editing articles of interest. What these articles might entail are subjects related to psychology, religion, and animated shows/movies.

Article Evaluation
My brother introduced me to Australian Indie/folk band, "The Paper Kites", about six years ago. I gained a new appreciation for folk as a genre and through their album Woodland, they became my favorite folk band. Playing guitar and singing with various friends, I've been told that my voice would work excellently in a calming folk band like The Paper Kites, so they also carry a lot of personal, musical inspiration for me. I checked out The Paper Kites Wikipedia page and to the best of my knowledge, most of the information checked out, but there were aspects of it worth commenting on. The first was that the initial history section could use a reference to the timing and circumstances surrounding the initial band founders adding three more members to their band, alongside the important initial details like musically what instrumental part of the band they fill. The second was that there were three music videos missing accreditation for their directors. The final was that in the bottom of the article under, "Awards and nominations", they were missing an entire award entry for winning, "adult album of the year", at ARIAS 2019 awards.

Missing Details
Near the bottom of the article it details the songs with music videos and their directors, and there are four slots completely empty, giving the improper sense that there wasn't a mentionable director for that music video. After multiple simple YouTube searches I was able to found in the info sections of the videos themselves that, "By my Side", "Without Your Love", and "Steal My Heart Away" were all directed by Drew Wilson.

Unmentioned Awards
The ARIA awards were briefly mentioned early in the article, but they weren't formalized under the "Awards and nominations" sections itself. All that is displayed is their "Australian video of the year" award from J awards. Being one of their two significant awards, it is definitely worth establishing in its' proper place.

Conclusion
From my personal research, the article was close to as good as it was gonna get without some new insights from the band itself. With that said it could have improved on its' references towards the information it was giving, it could have mentioned who directed three of their music videos, and it could have had consistent formatting by describing their ARIAS Awards nomination at the end (graph), as it did early on in text.