User:Osckrrtt22/Rindr/RespectRazzy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Osckrrtt22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Osckrrtt22/Rindr?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rindr

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There isn't anything drafted or sandboxed yet but the bibliography is done. The sources don't look like they are from very trustworthy sites. Maybe get in contact with a librarian to help you get reliable sources. I did and it has helped me out a lot. For the actual article I noticed a few things, there are no headings or subheadings which is something you could add to the article. I thought that you could split the middle section into two as it is pretty long.