User:Oscott101/San Joaquin Valley/Cpediav Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Oscott101


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Oscott101/San_Joaquin_Valley?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * San Joaquin Valley

Evaluate the drafted changes
Owen's contribution to the San Joaquin article is concise and and informative. He included statistics and information that was backed by multiple sources that he organized really well. His writing was also free of any biases or charged words. One small comment that I would make is to perhaps adjust the formatting of the sentence. It appears to contain several typo spaces. Overall, great work!