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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Maid cafe
 * Article Evaluation
 * The content is relevant to the topic. It is written neutrally but some claims need citations. Most citations are reliable but some could be improved (some were travel blogs). On the talk page someone wrote that they feel more history needs to be written about, which is one of my main critiques as well. User appears to never have added this in, so this would be one of the things I would focus on. Furthermore, I think the clientele section could get expanded on, sources permitting.
 * The content is relevant to the topic. It is written neutrally but some claims need citations. Most citations are reliable but some could be improved (some were travel blogs). On the talk page someone wrote that they feel more history needs to be written about, which is one of my main critiques as well. User appears to never have added this in, so this would be one of the things I would focus on. Furthermore, I think the clientele section could get expanded on, sources permitting.


 * Sources
 * https://journal.transformativeworks.org/index.php/twc/article/view/505/432
 * http://doi.org/10.15002/00014853
 * http://intersections.anu.edu.au/issue25/galbraith.htm

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Light skin in Japanese culture
 * Article Evaluation
 * Content is relevant. Not many sources but ones listed are relevant. I think it could go into the implications and effects and overall history more. Not much talk on the talk page besides someone asking about the history and relevance of it, or asking to diversify the language so those in Britain and Australia do not find the language racist or confusing. I think methods and implications needed to be added/expanded on, so that is what I would look to add to.
 * Article Evaluation
 * Content is relevant. Not many sources but ones listed are relevant. I think it could go into the implications and effects and overall history more. Not much talk on the talk page besides someone asking about the history and relevance of it, or asking to diversify the language so those in Britain and Australia do not find the language racist or confusing. I think methods and implications needed to be added/expanded on, so that is what I would look to add to.


 * Sources
 * https://www.law.uci.edu/lawreview/vol3/no4/Jones.pdf
 * https://www.researchgate.net/publication/274670085_Shiseido%27s_%27Empire_of_Beauty%27_Marketing_Japanese_Modernity_in_Northeast_Asia_1932-1945

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Senpai and kōhai
 * Article Evaluation
 * Overall, content relevant to topic. Written well and neutrally, with diverse sources and claims have citations. Think implications in workplace section could be expanded upon. Most of talk centers around pronunciation guides instead of content. History might be able to get expanded upon as well.
 * Overall, content relevant to topic. Written well and neutrally, with diverse sources and claims have citations. Think implications in workplace section could be expanded upon. Most of talk centers around pronunciation guides instead of content. History might be able to get expanded upon as well.


 * Sources

http://www.ling.hawaii.edu/graduate/Dissertations/YumikoEnyoFinal.pdf

https://pdxscholar.library.pdx.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1459&context=honorstheses

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 * Article Evaluation
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Option 5

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