User:Osewanne/Assistance for airline passengers with disabilities/Osewanne Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead Section

The lead section should introduce us to the topic without bias and give a bit of a background. As it is right now, it keeps a neutral point of view but a little bit more could be added to better follow the article topic.

Content

Focus primarily on what each country is doing to help provide assistance to those with disability. Comparing the the two different systems and see how airlines in different countries operate.

Tone and Balance

We could work on keeping a slightly more neutral tone when comparing Europe and the U.S in order to eliminate bias's.

Sources and References

There are a few sources, most of which are from 2017. Perhaps, getting more recent sources to show how this topic is constantly evolving over the years.

Organization and writing quality

There are 3 sections; the writing quality is okay.

Images and Media

This article only contains one image. It is a chair for persons with reduced mobility aboard aircraft. I think one more picture would be beneficial and could help support the topic visually.

Talk Page

The talk page has only one comment.

Overall Impressions

Overall, this article has come a long way since the beginning and now has more information on the topic that will help readers understand. I think it could use some more background and supporting arguments.