User:OsoBean/Javier Calvo (actor)/Braveyy Peer Review

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 * Javier Calvo (actor)
 * Javier Calvo (actor)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The first sentence of the lead section is strong, however the second sentence should be broken up in order to be easier to read. You mention adding that he's had successful projects, but I'm unsure how this differs from the accomplishments mentioned in the second sentence. Although concise, the the lead does not currently include a brief description of the article's major sections.

ContentThere seems to be some content overlap between the information presented in the "Biography" and "Personal life." His education could be relevant information to add to the "Biography" section. Overall, it appears that the "Career" section has been appropriately added to in comparison to the current version of the article. The chronological order of this section makes it easy to follow. I think the questions you have noted throughout are relevant and important to consider. For the table in the "Filmography" section, it could be beneficial to add "Actor" under the "Role column and then further specify the name of the character. For the "Awards and nominations" section, I think a table would also be an effective way to display information here. I'm not sure if it is also appropriate to include this information in the "Career" section.

Tone and Balance

The tone is unpersuasive and neutral in manner. You seem to be doing a good job of effectively taking some aspects of the Spanish page and concisely using them for your updates to the English page.

Sources and References

I believe that it is ideal to find sources that match the language of the article, so even though the Spanish page provides additional information on the content for you to include, it would be ideal to find sources in English that support this content. Also, make sure you have a source for each point in the "Career" section. I do not see one for the point about Calvo and Ambrossi appearing on the reality television talent competition Operación Triunfo.

Organization

Overall, the article is well organized and flows well from section to section and within each individual section. My only major note is regarding the "Biography" and "Personal life" sections. These seem to be very similar in the content that they will include, and I'm not sure that the very end is a logical place for the "Personal life" section.

Images and Media

It could be nice to add some images of him playing certain roles.

Overall Impression

On the whole, I think you are moving in the right direction with regards to adding needed content. Just be sure to remain concise and write in a straightforward manner that is easy to read.