User:Osopanda1224/Liliana Navarro/Roeihat Peer Review

General info
Osopanda1224 and Jesus9122
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Osopanda1224/Liliana_Navarro?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is very well-written. The biography section is short and to the point. You have a lot of relevant information about your artist, and you cite all of your references well. The format of your article is correct as well. The only critique I can make is to maybe condense the information a little bit to get rid of the "fluff" within the Art section of your article. That way, it will be a more impactful Wikipedia article that more people are likely to read. Well done.