User:Osterhc1/Carolina (Taylor Swift song)/Oliver1445 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Osterhc1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Osterhc1/Carolina (Taylor Swift song) - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Carolina (Taylor Swift song) - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead has not been updated to reflect content my peer has added. The content that my peer added is very relevant to the topic of this article. The content is also up to date, and there is no information missing or any that is out of place. This topic is very underrepresented, and the information is very neutral. I could not tell what the position of my peer was on this topic either. My peer adds information that has a widespread of viewpoints, and there is not a certain area that is overrepresented. Although two of the three sources my peer added are from the same source, they seem to be very reliable. I was able to check all of the links and they worked great. The content added was written well, and could be easily read. I believe the content added has improved the overall quality of the article. It helps to complete the article by adding more detail on the subject. The strengths of the content added are it provides a direct point of view from the director of the movie that the song is in. The other strength is it adds to the timeline of the creation/release of the song. The content can be improved by maybe removing the part that talks about why a source is reliable.