User:OtherwiseDrummer/Sodium channel/JoeyD Valle Peer Review

Review 2

It is looking great! I like all of your minor edits! Those are looking really solid.

About your note about the pH modulation section I agree that it is a bit long and clunky for a wiki article, but I think you have enough other things going on I would leave it for now.

For your main contribution you already noted this but add all those sources. The other thing that you might have just not done yet is to link a lot of those term to other article. ex: resting membrane potential could probably be linked to a more thorough explanation that might help a new reader. Other than adding those links I think you are in great shape!

Review 1

The sandbox is still messy but it looks like once everything gets incorporated it will look great

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