User:OtherwiseDrummer/Sodium channel/Rjcam2 Peer Review

General info
OtherwiseDrummer
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:OtherwiseDrummer/Sodium channel
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sodium channel

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: N/A

Content: your main contribution is clear and written well.

Tone/Balance: Voice is neutral.

Sources and References: Links in your reference section work and are appropriate. Add in-text citations.

Organization: Do you plan on keeping the subsections with your Sodium leak channels section? It may be more appropriate to integrate your information into a few small paragraphs to match the rest of the article.

Images: Add your figure.

Overall: It's great how you're really thinking about how to integrate your new section and how to improve the article overall with your "Small Edits" section. Writing of you section is clear and content is good and appropriate for the Wikipedia article. Consider condensing your section into a few paragraphs to match the styling of the other sections in this article.