User:Otis9281/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Form follows function


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article's content is relevant to the topic and is written neutrally. It could be improved by expanding upon the principle's usage in design more thoroughly. Also, there is a note on the page that mentions that the citations should be updated under one of the headers, and that could be a good place to improve as well.


 * Sources
 * Fit: An Architect's Manifesto
 * Function Follows Form: Some Affinities Between Pure Icons, Hardcore Architecture and OOO

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Storybook architecture


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is a bit underdeveloped. It only discusses Storybook architecture found in the Los Angeles and San Francisco Bay areas, and while it names affiliated architects, it only discusses a few of them very briefly with little detail. Improvements could be made to the detail of the article as a whole.


 * Sources
 * Storybook style : America's whimsical homes of the twenties by Arrol Gellner and Douglas Keister
 * 20th Century Storybook Homes: A Hollywood Take On Medieval and European Domestic Architecture

Option 3

 * Article title
 * East Grand Rapids High School


 * Article Evaluation
 * Overall, this article is well written. This article could be improved by updating the state championship listing (Boys cross country won the state championship in 2022 and has not been updated on the article). It also might be interesting to note that this is the school that Adam Herz (who is linked on the page) based the movie American Pie off of.


 * Sources
 * "The Michigan Daily Online"
 * State Champs! Network: 2022 LP Cross Country Finals Highlights

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Drink can


 * Article Evaluation
 * While otherwise very thorough, this article is missing a lot of citations. An improvement would be to go in and find sources to cite.


 * Sources
 * Can Central
 * Beverage Tan Do

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Ravonna


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is fairly extensive and well written. However, the publication history section only lists the character's original appearance. An improvement would be to go through and list more of her appearances. Another improvement would be to add more photos, as the only one of her in her comic form doesn't feature her well.


 * Sources

https://www.marvel.com/comics/discover/2135/ravonna-renslayer