User:Otis9281/Form follows function/Paneralover Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Otis9281


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Otis9281/Form follows function


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Form follows function

Evaluate the drafted changes
Unfortunately, there was not any work in your sandbox so I cannot peer review your contributions. It looked like you had some reliable sources in your bibliography. I did notice that your original article is not about a creative work like the assignment description states. You may want to rethink your article. I wish I could have read some of your ideas to improve your article. Best of luck!