User:Otis9281/Form follows function/WickedMacMedia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Otis9281


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Otis9281/Form_follows_function?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Form follows function

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the changes you have made in your draft are reasonable. You give the reader more context on the topic and what the purpose of Form follows function is. At the end of your addition you citied it with a up-to-date source so well done. Throughout the paragraph you wrote though I would say try finding more sources to cite your claims. Your tone and balance were spot on. Neutral standpoint. You also made a good edit crossing out "However" which started a paragraph and replaced it with "Despite coining the term, Louis". Added a lead to this article could be a good idea as well since the author goes on talking more about Louis Sullivan than form follows function itself.

By: WickedMacMedia