User:Outdooradventurer22/Summer 1993/Sunflower628 Peer Review

General info
(Outdooradventurer22)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewinghttps://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Outdooradventurer22/Summer_1993veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Summer 1993

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think adding the inspiration behind the movie was a really effective addition to the article. I think your edits made the article more specific and clear. The content you added is well-organized and everything flows well. I think that including more information in the plot section would strengthen the article and it may be interesting to add a section about what was happening around the time the movie was published. Overall the content added has improved the quality of the article.