User:Outdooradventurer22/Summer 1993/Valentinapicante Peer Review

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User:Outdooradventurer22
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 * User:Outdooradventurer22/Summer 1993
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 * Summer 1993

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good lead, but since Summer 1993 was not nominated for the Oscars, instead of mentioning that maybe center another detail around its biographical element or highlighting an actor if they went on to be very successful.

The summary is good and does not contain spoilers but is detailed enough.

I think the cast might be overly detailed. Typical articles only include cast members if they have a named role, but a handful of actors here play unnamed parts. If you're wrestling with being overdetailed this could be where you tighten the focus around principle actors.

The inspiration section is great and the sources linking to PDFs are very helpful.

I think stylistically the production section could be written in more of an active voice and the information about box office grosses could be moved to the reception section since it could fit better there.

I think the plot is well-detailed, but I would consider making it the first section after the cast.

I think your edits do a great job contextualizing Summer 1993 and adding more details about its plot and updating sources. I think this is amazing work so far, but the suggested edits would help stylistically align it more closely with other Wikipedia articles on films.