User:OutskirtAZ/Oxnard strike of 1903/Adr2018 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

OutskirtAZ


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:OutskirtAZ/Oxnard_strike_of_1903&veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&redirect=no
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Oxnard strike of 1903

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your additions were a solid start and fit very well in the article. The tone comes off as balanced given the historical context. I think you could add to some of the information by providing an example of prices for the good sold at the company stores. Additionally you could also add some information on the violence that took place during the strike since the original article just throws that in without warning. You can maybe also add some information on company muscle that was hired to break the strike, assuming that took place. The information you cited looks good and the source seems reliable. The organization is good any there is a lot of room to add new information. You may also be able to find some photograph from the time period, but since it is a older event there may not be many available. Overall, good work and it acts as a solid start.