User:Ovxt/Jam skating/Aliahmed.57 Peer Review

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(Ovxt)


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 * Jam skating


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Jam Skating

 * Starting off the lead topic sentence is concise which is good
 * I would suggest fixing the sections and actually make headings fro the topics so its easier to for people to read
 * I think you should add more detail to the sub topics of Jam Skating by making headings for them. For example maybe adding a heading for the context in history
 * I would add some pictures explaining Jam skating
 * You should of made the "Styles" into headings because its difficult to understand
 * Definitely make more headings overall for the history, styles, and types of display of Jam Skating

The article looks hood but there are some major changes that have to be taken care of which include the heading placement and what goes under the headings because there were some topics that didn't necessarily have to go underneath a heading and some information that should have gone under headings or had have its own headings. Other than that there is efficient information on the topic.