User:Owen Gunderman/Willy Chavarria/Fan Qi7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Owen Gunderman


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Owen%20Gunderman/Willy_Chavarria?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Willy Chavarria

Evaluate the drafted changes
Owen Gunderman currently is working on the Lead section. The content added is well relevant to the topic, which made a very proper supplement to this artist. In the Article Body section, the paragraphs of the existing article are pasted in, but still need to work on that. Keep working and don’t forget the references and the bibliography page:)