User:Owen Gunderman/Willy Chavarria/Horse DeWormer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Owen Gunderman


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Owen%20Gunderman/Willy_Chavarria?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Willy Chavarria

Evaluate the drafted changes
You have some great information here, especially the bit about Chavarria incorporating his own cultural influences into his work and explicitly calling attention to religion, race and sexuality, and his current impact on the fashion world. Separating the biography into categories definitely makes it feel more organized. I did notice, however, that most of your info appears to be in the existing article already. It might not be necessary to include the comment from Robin Givhan, or the fact that Chavarria drew the attention of Kanye West, unless you have come across any additional research that could be added. I also think that if his date of birth is unknown, it should be left out altogether because the blank space makes it look a bit unfinished. Including the references would also be helpful even if they can already be found on the existing page.