User:Owenpayne2000/sandbox

Peer Review Response 3/10 for Proposed Edit Response
Things that must be added/changed/updated


 * 1) Tie in to NYC, make my edit relevant to African Americans in New York City by adding an information about:
 * 2) Demographic changes? (May not exist yet)
 * 3) Neighborhood income shifts (May not exist yet)
 * 4) Infection rates by zip code, as provided by Ryan Sue
 * 5) Discuss treatment disparities, thanks again to Ryan Sue for providing me with a link
 * 6) Grammatically, I agree that my use of capitalization of "Black" is technically incorrect, but due to this being in reference to the ethnic group of African-Americans, its capitalization is correct according to APA standards
 * 7) If I have time to, and likely will do so of my own accord, I should add a section examining the Black social institutions affected by COVID-19, and how that has since affected communities. Assuming research can be found on the matter.