User:Ozioma00/Global governance/Naarkorful Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ozioma00


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ozioma00/Global_governance?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Global governance
 * Global governance

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Governance is meant to constitute institutional arrangements between both state and nonstate (insert "-" in between non - state) '''powers, applying that understanding of governance to the global health space helps describe the term Global Health Governance. Global Health Governance is being used to describe the different institutions of global governance that have both a direct and indirect impact on health. (What are the direct and indirect impacts? Go into depth on that.) Prior to 2002, the term Global Health Governance did not exist in either governance or global health discourse. (Was there a term that was used before this? What event/ moment caused for the term to be coined? )  Global Health Governance began as a means to describe the cross-border initiative happening amongst different structures and processes where global health issues are being addressed. No definition has been formally established for the term Global Health Governance. A call for “conceptual clarity” has been made on the term due to its multiple meanings.'''

Maybe include one more citation in this paragraph?

What is Global Health Governance?

'''The call for governance on global health was founded upon the need to address the rise of global health issues (ex. HIV, AIDs, etc.). In order to do so, Global Health Governance centers itself upon the interconnectivity that is needed between both state and non-state influences in order to govern global health. Global health governance created a space for both informal and formal institutions (examples of informal and formal institutions? What do you mean by those terms) to have a voice on the global health issues being seen around the world, this was done as a means to drive global health solidarity. By means of collaborative efforts, global health governance sets out to deal with the structural and normative aspects of managing the determinants and outcomes of global health. Global Health Governance understands how imperative collaborative efforts are across all borders due to the complexity of global health. These formal and informal processes operate beyond state boundaries, working at national, regional, and international levels.'''

Everything is relevant to the article topic? Nothing is distracting but there could be more added to clarify certain phrases for people who are not to well versed in the topic. Article is neutral and there are no adjectives or phrases that makes it seem like one side is being chosen over another.


 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? ---> The different viewpoints/ takes/perspectives on this issues are not directly stated. Wonder if you can include how different institutions feel about the issue or what their take is on it.
 * Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article? Yes.
 * Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted? All sources appear to be relevant and recent. I wonder if the 2nd citation on Nordic governance is just specific to the region and if so it should be stated in the paragraph.
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added? Look in text
 * Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted? All sources appear to be relevant and recent. I wonder if the 2nd citation on Nordic governance is just specific to the region and if so it should be stated in the paragraph.
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added? Look in text
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added? Look in text