User:Ozioma00/Philanthropy/Naarkorful Peer Review

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'''**My additions to this article will be renaming the Heading "Celebrity Philanthropy" and renaming it to "Types of Philanthropy". This is being done to broaden the portion of the article to include other kinds of philanthropy rather than specifying on a specific kind. This provides more clarity to the article and it also gives spaces for others in the future to list on other kinds of philanthropy.'''

Celebrity Philanthropy Types of philanthropy
'''Philanthropy as a means to alleviate human suffering and advance quality of life has been defined differently by different groups of people. This has created an opportunity for diverse forms of philanthropy to emerge. This diversity allows for different impacts to be made that are centered on the founding principles of philanthropy. The following are examples of different types of philanthropy.'''

Celebrity philanthropy
Celebrity philanthropy refers to celebrity-affiliated charitable and philanthropic activities. It is an increasingly prevalent topic of scholarship in studies of 'the popular' vis-à-vis the modern and post-modern world. Structured and systematised charitable giving by celebrities is a relatively new phenomenon. Although charity and fame are associated historically, it was only in the 1990s that entertainment and sports celebrities from affluent western societies became involved with a particular type of philanthropy. Celebrity philanthropy in contemporary western societies is not isolated to large one-off monetary donations by definition. It involves celebrities using their publicity, brand credibility and personal wealth to promote not-for-profit organisations, which are increasingly 'business-like' in form. This is sometimes termed as 'celanthropy' – the fusion of celebrity and cause as a representation of what the organisation advocates.

Diaspora philanthropy
'''Diaspora philanthropy is philanthropy conducted by diaspora populations either in their country of residence or in their countries of origin. In diaspora philanthropy, migrants and their descendants are front line distributors of aid, and enablers of development. Members of a diaspora are uniquely familiar with their community’s needs and the social, political, and economic factors that influence the delivery of those needs. Studies show that those who a part of the diaspora are more aware of the pressing and neglected issues of their community than outsiders or other wellwishers.'''

Peer Review
I think it is a good call to change Celebrity Philanthropy into "Types of Philanthropy"

---> The Philanthropy section in bold could reworded/ rephrased/ re-placed to sound more like an encyclopedia. Maybe consider interpreting it into the lead?

Good Up to Date Sources!

Seems to be neutral! Wondering if could add more on factors that explain Diaspora philanthropy?