User:P. Oncology/Jimmie C. Holland/Pothosjoy3 Peer Review

I really like what you have done with the Jimmie Holland article! I think the flow is good and your references are well cited.

I had just a couple of recommendations to possibly enhance your article. The first one is, I think it would be beneficial if you expanded upon what APOS and IPOS are and what their purposes are. In other words, what did the creation of these society's contribute to medicine? what about to psychology? What inspired her to create these if it is known.

Secondly, I think it would be great, considering we've been reading the book in class, if you considered making "The Human Side of Cancer" its own subsection and expanded on the purpose of this book, what the main messages are, and the impact this book had on the psycho-oncology field.

Again these recommendations have the potential to enhance your work and detail, but what you have now is great.