User:P. Oncology/Prostate cancer screening/0psychstudent0 Peer Review

General info
Dandelions-love-to-fly, MTFFTM, P. Oncology
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:P. Oncology/Prostate cancer screening
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Prostate cancer screening

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content you’ve revised so far is excellent. The original page has unprofessional and unacademic wording and your revision has a well informed academic tone.

Thank you I decided to add more to another page but thank you for your input! Dandylions-love-to-fly