User:P. Oncology/Prostate cancer screening/Pothosjoy3 Peer Review

I think this topic is very interesting and important for people who are looking for information on the topic. I have a few recommendations that may enhance your article page.


 * 1) Make sure to cite your sources, not just wikipedia page links.
 * 2) I don't see much in the original article about treatment, maybe you could add more about this? Maybe different treatment and care, inclusive of a more medical side as well as the psychological side of developing prostate cancer.
 * 3) I think that due to our class' focus on psychology, I think it would be interesting to maybe add a subsection on the psychological effects that having prostate cancer has on an individual. (I think there have been parts of the book that talk about this)

Overall the original article already has a lot of good information but I think some of these enhancements may add to the detail and psychooncology aspect of prostate cancer.

Thank you so much for your input! I decided to add more to a different page but I will keep all your tips in mind for my other article. Dandelions-love-to-fly