User:PDLemoo/Monopropellant rocket/Mnbkv6 Peer Review

General info
PDLemoo
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to the draft you're reviewing
 * User:PDLemoo/Monopropellant rocket
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Monopropellant rocket

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would suggest adding a lead section to the article to introduce the topic rather than just diving into the science behind the monopropellant rockets. The first little paragraph adds a little bit of information but it would be nice to understand why monopropellant rockets are unique or special.

I think you did very well finding a content gap in the article talking about the history of the use of a single propellant. On top of that, the tone and balance of the portion you have been drafting is really good. Looking at the references they are all credible and add aspects to the article I was just wondering if you could find any sources not from NASA just to kind of get another opinion.

The structure of the article and your draft are both very neat and organized. The article could use some pictures later on when we learn how to do that.

Overall the content drafted would improve the overall article by giving some about how it has been used in the past. The draft does a good job of showing why and how we have used monopropellant fuels for rockets in the past and what important missions it has been a part of. Something I would suggest adding to the article would be to link some parts of your draft to other wiki pages for a better understanding. For example, I would suggest linking the Pioneer 3 mission and the Ranger VII mission so people could gain some extra insight into why those missions were important and why monopropellant rockets are important.