User:PE054/Bath & Body Works/Isaiahjoe123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

PE054


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:PE054/Bath & Body Works


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bath & Body Works

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello PE054, there were some things in your article draft that was very good. I'm really impressed on how you explained the history of the company. You made everything clear about what happened throughout the recent years, especially during a tragic pandemic.

Everything is good about this draft, there is really not a lot you can change about this draft. However, I'd work on the grammar and have better punctuation. Other than that, we can improvement those two because you would want to help reader have a better understanding on what the article is talking about.

The most important thing to need to apply for this article is the citations/references. I see you only applied one reference, which is a good. However, I advise you to add at least 5 link as references because it'll help readers have a better understanding on where you got most of your information from. Another thing is that this article need a final statement or conclusion because it'll help readers know the outcome of the company and what is happening currently.

Overall, I am really satisfied of this article. There were a lot of important things you pointed out about this sort of topic. I'll recommend this style of writing to help my article out or maybe others!