User:PHstudentwiki/Kidney cancer/Bel4247 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(PHstudentwiki)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PHstudentwiki/Kidney_cancer?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kidney cancer

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall great job with article daft. We really liked how you incorpated the facts of Kidney cancer being the 13th most common form of cancer. That part is something that was not in the orginal article. We also liked how you broke it down and included lifestyle, age, sex, race, international variations and screening. It brings clear and strengthens the epidermology part of the disease. The tone of the article is neutral and have credibility with your sources.