User:PHstudentwiki/Kidney cancer/Tuliptooley Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gracehelgeson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Kidney cancer


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is very little dates in the whole article, this would make it more valid if there are some years of the data. Are there any groups of people that have a greater risk to kidney cancer compared to other? If there is you should state those on here. This article did teach me more about kidney cancer then I previously knew and does a good job reaching many different aspects, very brief but thorough. The sources all look good and you did good with direct citations after facts.