User:PMMorin/American Indian boarding schools/Maria.arguetalandave Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

PMorin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * American Indian boarding schools - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * American Indian boarding schools - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
1.How much scholarly evidence did the group use on the page? Did they include at least three in-text citations? What was the quality of the references? Were summaries from the reference appropriate? (no plagiarism!) "The group did a great job of incorporating updated scholarly evidence and in-text citations. The sources were appropriate and peer reviewed and very well summarized within the article. Things were cited appropriately and nothing seemed to be copy/pasted directly from sources without appropriate citations. I appreciated that many of the references added were recent and up-to-date sources of information."2.How effectively did the group incorporate visuals into the page? Did they include at least two images on the page and what was the quality of the images? 3.How well written was the page? Grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure Was the page written in a way that made it accessible for the public? (No jargon)"Four images have been included on the page. They are all appropriate for the content and add a sense of realness to the topic. The writing of the page is well done. It is written in a way that is easily understandable and easy to follow by anyone reading the information. I appreciated the many linked pages to other sites that were relevant to the topic. Punctuation was missing in some areas, a couple quotation marks missing from quotes, but otherwise grammar and punctuation was consistent and well written."