User:PSCI226/Wassoulou Empire/Mahaletn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

PSCI226


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PSCI226/Wassoulou_Empire?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wassoulou Empire

Lead
The lead is short, but it sets up the content of the article well. There's a strong introductory sentence describing the Wassoulou Empire. Since the next paragraph introduces the origin of the empire, enough info is given about the topic for it to make sense. Maybe a sentence describing the main sections in the article would be nice.

Content
There's a lot of added material to the article compared to the original. I really like how you included the "Origin and preceding events" section since it sets up nicely the rest of the information given in the article. All added content is relevant to the topic. Considering the original article focused on the army/expansion of the Empire, it's nice you included a section specifically about the society, economics, and religion of the empire. I think if you continue adding to that section your entire article will be well-rounded

Tone
There's no signs of any bias towards one side and is neutral about the subject.

Organization
The overall organization of the article is good. I think it would be helpful to have bolded headings so you can differentiate between the paragraph and new section but thats an easy fix. The article is concise when needed and split into three sections.

Overall Impression
This article is really good! It provides more context and information about the Wassoulou Empire while still remaining neutral. For improvements, maybe a bit more detailed lead to reflect the new sections and more information on the societal and religious aspect of the empire.