User:PSCI226/Wassoulou Empire/Reesedog15 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

PSCI226


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PSCI226/Wassoulou_Empire?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wassoulou Empire
 * Wassoulou Empire

Lead
The lead has been updated to reflect changes to the article. It's concise, but it does not include a brief description of the article's sections. In the lead, it might be informative to include more information about the topic, in addition to geography and timeline.

Content
The new content you've added is awesome! These additions will greatly benefit the existing article. All content is relevant and up-to-date. Furthermore, the new content helps address a historically underrepresented topic on Wikipedia, which helps address an equity gap.

Tone and Balance
The content in this draft maintains a balanced, neutral tone. No one perspective is overrepresented, and you don't try to convince the reader to adopt a certain viewpoint. The content you've added serves to inform, not to persuade. Great job!

Sources and References
The sources added to this article are quite strong. All sources come from peer-reviewed publications. However, there are a few formatting issues that could be improved. First, you should add footnotes to your content where appropriate so that it's easy to see which content is associated with which source. Second, you should use the Wikipedia citation functionality to create your bibliography. At the moment there are no links, which makes it a bit tricky to track down your sources.

Organization
This draft is fairly well-organized. Content is organized under subheadings according to subtopic. It would be easier to read if you used the Wikipedia subheading formatting to make the subheadings stand out from the paragraph text. There are a few minor spelling and grammar issues. For instance, make sure Guinea is capitalized in the Colonial Conflict and Army section. It also might be a good idea to change the structure of some of your sentences. For instance, "It spanned from what is now Southwestern Mali and upper Guinea, with its capital in Bissandugu, it gradually moved further south and East into Northern Ghana and Cote D’ivor" could be reworded to make it easier to read.

Overall Impressions
Overall, this is a very strong draft! After a few formatting changes and minor edits, as mentioned above, these contributions will significantly improve the existing Wassoulou Empire page.