User:Packarec3037/Motor vehicle emissions and pregnancy/IssaEm Peer Review

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Packarec3037
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Packarec3037/Motor vehicle emissions and pregnancy
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Motor vehicle emissions and pregnancy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Pack, Here's our peer review for you!

Your epidemiology section you have added to this article is written very well, it's very easy to understand especially how you had simplified the information enough for a the general public who may not have studied PH so they would be able to comprehend the information you have given/added.

You also have done a good job on remaining neutral with comparing the regulations between the US and other countries emissions regulations.

Your section about how it will affect the population is also done well, i like you have gone into detail how more strict regulations in japan had lowered the prevalence of respiratory diseases, along with how it can affect pregnancies and cause miscarriages.

Overall I would recommend adding some more information about prevalences in both the US and Europe as you did mention those with comparing their regulations on emission, also maybe add some more groups who are negatively affected by motor emissions by chance.