User:Paco BRG/Bocage/Jacob Atkinson Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Paco BRG
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Paco BRG/Bocage

Lead
Guiding questions:

Content
Guiding questions:


 * The content is relevant.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Content is from a neutral perspective.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * There are no sources as of yet.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * content is mostly in bullet format currently. But ideas are in a coherent sequence.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions

overall, I think there are some very interesting ideas you plan on adding to the article. Just maybe some sources for clarity would be helpful.