User:Paige5678/Corporate social media/Rogersn19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Paige5678


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Paige5678/Corporate_social_media?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Corporate social media

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your draft changes are on the right track. I think the wording of the article could be updated to be more concise. In addition, after reading the article and browsing through the talk page, I think some of the work that could be done is to include more content and flush out some of the sections. In particular why corporations lean toward social media as a focus for marketing. I think you could also find some really concrete examples of benefits and risks of this marketing approach. For instance, with corporations online they are always under fire. I think about all of the times I have seen employees being rude to customers and the video goes viral.

I think you have tons to work with ! I look forward to seeing how you continue to flush things out.

~rogersn19

(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

rogersn19,

Thank you for this helpful feedback! I will take your ideas into consideration as I continue to work through this article. I appreciate your ideas and thoughts on how to make it better.

~paige5678