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History of the Civil Air Patrol
Talk:History of the Civil Air Patrol

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I've chosen this article because how it came to be interests me. The history of civil air patrol is important because it's an introduction of what the military looks like to younger generations which in turn, keeps the military's numbers up. My first impression of the article is that it could use some work due to having some grammatical errors right off the bat.

Evaluate the article
Under "First 3 Airfield", it seems very informal and looks like some of the sentences weren't a complete thought. Throughout the article, the writer uses personal pronouns which shouldn't be used when writing about an informative article, especially about history. In the 4th stanza of this article under "Claims of U-Boat sinking by Haggins and Farr", the article turns completely off topic by talking about the primings off books and how the writer of the article doesn't recall anything more specific and says that it's another reason frothier skepticism (which is spelled wrong). Overall, this article is very opinionated which is very unprofessional for an informative article.