User:Paightyn/Hyacinth macaw/Captainkerme Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Paightyn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Paightyn/Hyacinth_macaw?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hyacinth macaw

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I do believe your content does improve the quality of the article, but I would say that the "Toco Toucan" portion of the sandbox in ecology should be moved to threats instead. Though it is the natural process, the Hyacinth macaw is suffering from environmental pressures that causes conflict between their habitat destruction and the constant predation of their offspring. I also think your contribution would benefit from a source for the sentence "This species specifically requires previously occupied holes within the Manduvi trees in order to nest, so nesting availability can be sparse." to help with clarification on where this information is from. Additionally, the use of hyperlinks are also helpful in tying several Wikipedia topics together, and helps with concisiveness.

Overall, you are doing a wonderful job, and I have learned something new that I did not know about Hyacinth macaws from the original Wikipedia article.