User:Paightyn/Hyacinth macaw/Oderdul Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Paightyn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Paightyn/Hyacinth_macaw?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think yours is really good so far!

The only thing I'd say is to add a few more sources- it adds to the article's credibility.